Story images and Portraits for demon campaign
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Story images and Portraits for demon campaign
img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2305/female1sd6.th.png[/img]
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2305/female1sd6.png
Little girl grown up
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/7996/male1io4.png
Devil prince
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2305/female1sd6.png
Little girl grown up
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/7996/male1io4.png
Devil prince
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Re: Portraits for demon campaign
The devil prince is not bad at all! The girl has some serious issues, though (ok, I don't know about the girl, but the *portrait* of the girl does).
Main problems: the features of her face are misaligned, her neck is way too long and her shoulders too wide (especially for a female, I mean, not even Gabriela Sabatini has that kind of shoulders).
Here, a few brutal hacks only intended to show what I mean.
Main problems: the features of her face are misaligned, her neck is way too long and her shoulders too wide (especially for a female, I mean, not even Gabriela Sabatini has that kind of shoulders).
Here, a few brutal hacks only intended to show what I mean.
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http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7868/female1rl7.png
adjustments were made, I'm not used to drawing females yet
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Thanks for the suggestions. I tried to make most of those adjustments to my best current abilities. The eyes remain the distance apart kind of as a distinct facial feature to identify with her child version of portrait, there are ppl with eyes slightly further apart than normal, as there are ppl the other way around too. Anyhow I'm going to stop adjusting the female picture just cuz it grows a little old after revising it many times, but I'll still gladly take suggestions on it in order to make future portraits look better.
girl picture is supposed to be younger version of female picture. She's supposed to look depressed or pissed off or something like that. Something was wrong with the scanner... made it look all weird.
edit: looks like I have to revise female picture once again, hands.
girl picture is supposed to be younger version of female picture. She's supposed to look depressed or pissed off or something like that. Something was wrong with the scanner... made it look all weird.
edit: looks like I have to revise female picture once again, hands.
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new ones
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9498/img109pe3.jpg
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/2151/img110ly9.jpg
and Old ones ready for coloring.
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/6752/female1kd9.png
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2059/male1vr2.png
and unrelated stuff.
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3549/img112si3.jpg
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9498/img109pe3.jpg
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/2151/img110ly9.jpg
and Old ones ready for coloring.
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/6752/female1kd9.png
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/2059/male1vr2.png
and unrelated stuff.
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3549/img112si3.jpg
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Ty. Suggestions are still welcome and appreciated, I'd love to learn more and get better. Well, suggestions don't have to be restricted to the ones I've already drawn, I'm willing to listen to what you want to see for the ones I haven't done yet too.
I've been wondering about the size and dimention requirements of portraits and "scenes", the bigger pictures.
, and if no objections I'm going to go ahead color the old ones and refine the lines for the new ones.
A list mostly for myself, everything that needs a portrait.
girl young /
girl grown //
father young
father old -
devil father of prince //
devil prince //
devil general /
baal /
oracle/
generic demon /
generic imp /
generic vampire -
vampire leader
vampire emperor +
op daoist
op deathknight
zealot
necromancer -
op princess... later?
powerful white priest /
witch v
elven slyph v
young hero //
+ ones sketched but not scanned. - still working on. / sketched and scanned. // lines refined. V colored.
just 5 more to go.
I've been wondering about the size and dimention requirements of portraits and "scenes", the bigger pictures.
, and if no objections I'm going to go ahead color the old ones and refine the lines for the new ones.
A list mostly for myself, everything that needs a portrait.
girl young /
girl grown //
father young
father old -
devil father of prince //
devil prince //
devil general /
baal /
oracle/
generic demon /
generic imp /
generic vampire -
vampire leader
vampire emperor +
op daoist
op deathknight
zealot
necromancer -
op princess... later?
powerful white priest /
witch v
elven slyph v
young hero //
+ ones sketched but not scanned. - still working on. / sketched and scanned. // lines refined. V colored.
just 5 more to go.
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This color scheme is ok?
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/8830/elisa2betz1.jpg
Old
Lieutenant and Jeear.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4236/male2qy3.png
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1760/jeearvw0.png
new
Baal, scanner was weird on the first one, second one is going to wear the same armor as first picture.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/2365/baal1sk7.jpg
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/7572/baal2gm2.jpg
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/8830/elisa2betz1.jpg
Old
Lieutenant and Jeear.
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4236/male2qy3.png
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/1760/jeearvw0.png
new
Baal, scanner was weird on the first one, second one is going to wear the same armor as first picture.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/2365/baal1sk7.jpg
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/7572/baal2gm2.jpg
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compiled more.
For imp comparison
For imp comparison
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- I don't know what this could be.
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- what filename says.
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- practice horses.
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- No they aren't having sex
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- imp
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portrait for slyph... spylh... sylph, oh man... is here.
the other most recent one->a vampire demon.
the other most recent one->a vampire demon.
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