Syntax_Error wrote:overall, it sounds REALLY similar to UtBS, youd better use some REALLY big plot twists to make some difference.
The story that I want to tell here is some melodramatic relation between a human and an elf, as a secondary thread, but the primary is the invasion of demons to the land where Wesnoth used to be. I'd like to know more details of what quartex (original author of UtBS) or whoever wrote the story plot, was thinking back then, but since that will not happen unless I'm blessed by Eloh, I'm making assumptions about how the story goes.
Spoilers start here.
The elves, after vanquishing Yanqui, parted ways. Some went to the middle south desert, loyal to their leaders (Tanuil or Tanuil's ancestor), and others decided to go to the eastern unknown lands, east from what in Wesnoth's era was known as the Northern Elves' forest. They coincidentally found, when starving to death, a cave system that led them to a valley where all that was no longer present in the rest of the land, such as flowers, trees, grass, was still there, protected by the border mountains of that valley, which they named in honor to their savior from the war against the Wesmere Elves.
So they stayed there, unknowing what happened to their relatives, the Quenoth Elves. For centuries and centuries they stayed in that peaceful valley, even after the Quenoth elves (again, without they being aware of that) colonized the Zochthanol Isle, after vanquishing Yechnagoth, which was supposed to be the source of the evil that took over the remaining humans, nagas, orcs and other specimens in sea and land.
However, in my plot, later we'll find out that it was the humans who opened a portal to the underworld (a.k.a. "hell") accidentally, unleashing unknown evil to the land of wesnoth, the first being Yechnagoth. One of the elvish saviors, which they thought were Eloh herself, was turned to evil by this power, initially acting as Yechnagoth's minion, later recovering his own will, although badly corrupted by evil.
Quenoth elves won't appear in this history except like a cameo, I think. Mal Keshar does have a supporting role since scenario 3, and Elynia should have a protagonic role around scenaria 12 or 13. I'm not sure yet, but it's highly probable that Analia or Galas... or both, die at that point.
Spoilers end here.
SynErr, when I said FPS and RPG gameplay elements* I meant gameplay elements. You've got to see it materialized to understand, and that is what I'm writing right now. Just wait and you'll see. I have no deadlines, but it should not take too long.
*: i.e. power-up items, healing items, mid-game "bosses", and other stuff - but they won't be used in a regular manner, just every 7 or 8 scenarios.