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by Query
August 31st, 2008, 10:05 pm
Forum: Users’ Forum
Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Replies: 9
Views: 1757

Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion

Maybe we should make a copy-editors thread. People could even submit their stuff to be proofread.
by Query
August 31st, 2008, 1:31 pm
Forum: Users’ Forum
Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Replies: 9
Views: 1757

Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion

I just looked it up, and you are all right on the direction issue, so that's no longer a problem. A couple things: "...most of the elves slept uneasily with few unlucky keeping cautious watch." There needs to be a comma between "uneasily" and "with". I'm pretty sure wit...
by Query
August 30th, 2008, 11:42 pm
Forum: Users’ Forum
Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Replies: 9
Views: 1757

Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion

Okay, a few mistakes: Defend the Forest "My lord! A party of aliens set a camp to the north and lays waste to the forest. Scouts..." First of all, aliens is used awkwardly here. I suggest a different word. Second, for the tenses to make more sense, it should be "a party of aliens has ...
by Query
August 30th, 2008, 10:18 pm
Forum: Users’ Forum
Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Replies: 9
Views: 1757

Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion

All right, thank you. I've forgotten where the ones I first found are, but I'll report any new ones here.
by Query
August 30th, 2008, 7:16 pm
Forum: Users’ Forum
Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Replies: 9
Views: 1757

Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion

Hey, I'm looking for the discussion thread for Orcish Incursion, to report some dialog problems. Does it exist? If so, where can I find it?
by Query
September 22nd, 2007, 2:04 pm
Forum: Art Workshop
Topic: Brand New Desert Elves!!!!!!
Replies: 31
Views: 9506

I really love the new look. The, arm, however, is a little buff, as Jetryl said.
by Query
September 17th, 2007, 9:31 pm
Forum: Art Workshop
Topic: Elf Druid
Replies: 126
Views: 28550

Are Devs going to commit any of the final versions?
by Query
September 11th, 2007, 8:08 pm
Forum: Art Contributions
Topic: Standing and idle animations?
Replies: 1140
Views: 344577

Redeth wrote:My point is, if you´re not willing to help make it any better, then shut it.
That isn't a very constructive attitude.
by Query
September 10th, 2007, 7:13 pm
Forum: Mainline Campaign Development
Topic: Art issues for Mainline Campaigns
Replies: 32
Views: 29574

Just for your list, Eleazar, it's Descent into Darkness, not Decent. Unfortunately, there's nothing decent about darkness. :wink:

whatever do you mean? :P
-- turin, corrector of typos
by Query
August 29th, 2007, 1:37 am
Forum: Art Workshop
Topic: Elf Druid
Replies: 126
Views: 28550

Congratulations to you two on both your final portraits, they both look much much better. The original still looks slightly better, but I don't think that can be helped.
by Query
August 26th, 2007, 3:23 pm
Forum: Art Workshop
Topic: Elf Druid
Replies: 126
Views: 28550

The face is in the right place, but the eyes still look a bit off compared to the black and white version.
by Query
August 26th, 2007, 12:01 am
Forum: Art Workshop
Topic: Elf Druid
Replies: 126
Views: 28550

I wish I could describe it better, but the face just doesn't look right.