Nice. The only part that strikes me as being a bit off is 0:45-0:50. I have no idea what I should call that brief rhythm/beat/whatever shift or whatever it is or how to describe it, though (even when I know it and have used it myself), so I'll just hope you know what I mean and why.
The word builder really kicks my trash. It's my next project to finally figure out how to use the blasted thing so that I can do the cool choir stuff. It amazes me how different sounding the EastWest libraries can sound under different hands.
nice job! Did you use the same application for the mix?
"Of course His Majesty is a pacifist. When I told him that to initiate war was a mistake, he agreed.Thus, gradually, he began to lead toward war."-Emperor Shòwa (Enlightened Peace)'s chief cabinet secretary
Wordbuilder is a bit of a bear to get running smoothly, but it's a lot of fun to play with once it's set up.
I use Pro Tools for programming and mixing.
I agree with you regarding Wordbuilder. It's tricky, but fun. You will hear it in the piece I'm STILL working on for Wesnoth (back burner because of another project).
0:42 - sounds like the violinist stumbles
0:45-50 as zookeeper said
I think you did a wonderful job on the brass melodies. You use very nice contrast between the strings and the brass, but the strings are too playful and light hearted for my tastes.
The only part that strikes me as being a bit off is 0:45-0:50. I have no idea what I should call that brief rhythm/beat/whatever shift or whatever it is or how to describe it, though (even when I know it and have used it myself), so I'll just hope you know what I mean and why. 
