First attempts at spriting
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Actually, with my untrained eye, I can see many spots in which there are still traces of the original brown shading; if this can be replaced with a shade of green the problem would probably be eliminated.
And in both sprites, something simply isn't right with the cross on the staff.
IMO, these problem's aren't too big, and they can certainly be fixed to result in something really nice.
And in both sprites, something simply isn't right with the cross on the staff.
IMO, these problem's aren't too big, and they can certainly be fixed to result in something really nice.
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just wondering
just wondering, how are you going to fit green magic-users with pirates?
You should see my staff!
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Re: just wondering
I don't believe he intends to put green mages and pirate together, he's just making different sprites. (Correct me if I'm wrong.)Ebob wrote:just wondering, how are you going to fit green magic-users with pirates?
What's this annoying thing that appears at the bottom of every one of my posts?
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His left arm has 3 joints (red dots) not counting wrist, so one joint to many. Also, I'm not sure if his torso is drawn in the right plane. If I'm not wrong (and someone correct me if I'm not), torso and arms should be in plane that is parallel with head (eyes) and perpendicular to feet (red lines), but it's not.
Hope it was constructive enough.
Keep up with good work,
I.