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- August 31st, 2008, 10:05 pm
- Forum: Users’ Forum
- Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2170
Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Maybe we should make a copy-editors thread. People could even submit their stuff to be proofread.
- August 31st, 2008, 1:31 pm
- Forum: Users’ Forum
- Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2170
Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
I just looked it up, and you are all right on the direction issue, so that's no longer a problem. A couple things: "...most of the elves slept uneasily with few unlucky keeping cautious watch." There needs to be a comma between "uneasily" and "with". I'm pretty sure wit...
- August 30th, 2008, 11:42 pm
- Forum: Users’ Forum
- Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2170
Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Okay, a few mistakes: Defend the Forest "My lord! A party of aliens set a camp to the north and lays waste to the forest. Scouts..." First of all, aliens is used awkwardly here. I suggest a different word. Second, for the tenses to make more sense, it should be "a party of aliens has ...
- August 30th, 2008, 10:18 pm
- Forum: Users’ Forum
- Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2170
Re: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
All right, thank you. I've forgotten where the ones I first found are, but I'll report any new ones here.
- August 30th, 2008, 7:16 pm
- Forum: Users’ Forum
- Topic: Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2170
Trouble Finding Orcish Incursion
Hey, I'm looking for the discussion thread for Orcish Incursion, to report some dialog problems. Does it exist? If so, where can I find it?
- September 22nd, 2007, 2:04 pm
- Forum: Art Workshop
- Topic: Brand New Desert Elves!!!!!!
- Replies: 31
- Views: 11247
- September 17th, 2007, 9:31 pm
- Forum: Art Workshop
- Topic: Elf Druid
- Replies: 126
- Views: 34086
- September 11th, 2007, 8:08 pm
- Forum: Art Contributions
- Topic: Standing and idle animations?
- Replies: 1144
- Views: 446317
- September 10th, 2007, 7:13 pm
- Forum: Mainline Campaign Development
- Topic: Art issues for Mainline Campaigns
- Replies: 32
- Views: 42511
- August 29th, 2007, 1:37 am
- Forum: Art Workshop
- Topic: Elf Druid
- Replies: 126
- Views: 34086
- August 26th, 2007, 3:23 pm
- Forum: Art Workshop
- Topic: Elf Druid
- Replies: 126
- Views: 34086
- August 26th, 2007, 12:01 am
- Forum: Art Workshop
- Topic: Elf Druid
- Replies: 126
- Views: 34086